With the melody of crackles of the flames as his sole companion:
A servant to his mind,
His life saved by his thoughts -
His desire quenched by a double malt;
Tamed on the rocks.
His state of mind?
Manifest!!!
Asking himself-
Is this déjà vu?
No!!!
His thoughts have come to being.
Classic paintings, camouflaging the sense of success,
Simultaneously accentuated
by the scent of achievement.
In his head- where it all emanated.
The quality of his thoughts,
Determined his life...
and the quality of my though will lead me on in 2013, God coming first
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Ernest dis is so so unfair , u write. A beautiful piece & then u leave us in suspense....
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DeleteTell me my dear friend, how would you have wanted it to turn out?
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