Sunday 30 December 2012

Life from thoughts

Beside the fireplace,
With the melody of crackles of the flames as his sole companion:

A servant to his mind,
His life saved by his thoughts -
His desire quenched by a double malt;
Tamed on the rocks.

His state of mind?
Manifest!!!
Asking himself-
Is this déjà vu?

No!!!
His thoughts have come to being.
Classic paintings, camouflaging the sense of success,
Simultaneously accentuated
by the scent of achievement.
In his head- where it all emanated.

The quality of his thoughts,
Determined his life...

8 comments:

  1. and the quality of my though will lead me on in 2013, God coming first

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  2. Wow,your stuff's pretty deep.I really like your work.Keep pushing this hey!

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    1. Thank you very much for that encouraging comment. I will strive to produce more, If you have any ideas or suggestions, let me know hey

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  3. Wooow u pretty amazing boo, m proud o u dear friend

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    1. Dear Anonymous


      Even though I have no idea whom you are
      I thank you very much for the encouragement

      Thank you

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  4. thandekile p mguni30 January 2013 at 11:00

    Ernest dis is so so unfair , u write. A beautiful piece & then u leave us in suspense....

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    1. Thandekile

      Tell me my dear friend, how would you have wanted it to turn out?
      Thank you all the same for your continued support for

      #UntitledChronicles

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